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Old January 21st, 2005, 07:34 PM
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Although the contents is not yet fully complete I would appreciate any views that you may have about this site to show my digital design work for clients...

www.adamjordan.co.uk

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Old January 22nd, 2005, 05:33 PM
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That banner image needs something for the eye to focus on.

While numbering pages makes database queries easier, people and search engines prefer names.
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Old January 23rd, 2005, 03:26 AM
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Something for the eye to focus on?.... okay i had a little idea and this is what i came up with. Would appreciate anyones opinions.... does this take attention off the page tho? http://www.adamjordan.co.uk/aj_index.php

And about the page naming, how would i go about that? I friend has helped me with a large part of the coding....

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dont worry about the pages just use meta tags in your index page and you will be fine. also make sure that the links you have on your page to other sites have links coming back to your page or you wont get good results on google.
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And about the page naming, how would i go about that? I friend has helped me with a large part of the coding....


You would probably have to have most of the system modified to use names instead of numbers.

It's obvious to me that you are good with graphics and have almost no clue when it comes to programming.

http://validator.w3.org/check?verbo...k/%3Fpg%3D10096
http://www.positioniseverything.net...ficientcss.html
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Hey,
The website looks great! Colorful, has a cool look.

Goodluck with everything
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Old January 27th, 2005, 10:03 AM
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I know them sort of sites always display loads of errors to make my coding appear rubbish... but check out a review for ebay

http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.ebay.co.uk&charset=%28detect+automatically%29&doctype=%28detect+automatically%29&verbose=1
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Just because big well known sites don't comply to internet standards doesn't mean that you shouldn't comply either.

http://www.uwplatt.edu/web/webstandards/
http://www.uwec.edu/cwcw/webstandards/
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Old January 28th, 2005, 11:16 AM
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fair enough.... just think that if anyones site should comply then it should be those who pay multi millions of £'s to get their site running
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Old January 28th, 2005, 07:29 PM
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that 3 column layout is very popular is that front page?
business types eat it up, YOU GO GRRL, or uh dude

great design at the top!
Last edited by jereme_rucker : January 28th, 2005 at 07:32 PM. Reason: i thought of something
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Old January 29th, 2005, 12:42 PM
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Cheers... yeah its FrontPage.

The site doesn't contain that much content so i felt the 3 column effect would work best at delivering smaller chunks of information. I'm so used to seeing portfolio pages with flash animations or large graphics everywhere that look like professionals that would not have a clue of how to design a corporate site... only one for other graphic designers! if you get what i mean?
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