www.lets-meet-here.com

I am starting a new dating service and have set up a website to help advertise it. Although I have gotten positive feedback about my site, I am getting the distint impression that it may be too wordy or is not inducing visitors to take the leap and do business with me. Is there a (reasonably priced) service around that can not only prescribe improvements, but also make them? I am totally open to any suggestions.

Jennifer
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If you do mean lets-meet-here.com I can say it is not too wordy. Maybe you need to tell your future customers more about positive experience of making friendship and relations online. Make them feel comfortable. They need to decide it is worth money. You may look for some testimonials.

Regards
D.

Thank you for your response.

The only problem with posting testimonials at this point, is that we are still a start up. I don't have any success stories as of yet although I hope that I will soon. I am trying to keep things as up front and honest as possible.

Jennifer
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