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Old October 1st, 2004, 07:03 PM
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www.majd-gfx.com

http://www.majd-gfx.com what do u guys think? (graphic wize)

please view this in Firefox...if u don't have firefox...WHAT ARE YOU THINKING????


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Old October 2nd, 2004, 02:38 AM
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Please tell me the on/off button will do something when it's finished...

The text is kind of hard to read, light brown on ligter brown doesn't really work.

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Old October 2nd, 2004, 06:05 AM
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it should look fine in all browsers btw

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Old October 2nd, 2004, 12:06 PM
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hehe yeah the on/off button will turn the lights on/off when im done coding. umm i'm gonna change a lotta things in it, i realize it's hard to read. thank you very much guys.

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Old October 2nd, 2004, 12:34 PM
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it's not bad. I think you may have overdone it a bit with the hoses and whatnot but I definitely remember when I was doing stuff like this and it was fun to do.

I would say that the menu looks kind of drap compared to all the stuff going on around it. they're just white boxes. maybe chrome them up?

just my $0.02

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Old October 2nd, 2004, 01:48 PM
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hehe yeah it's fun...this is my last industrial type site though.....im goin either trendwh0re or professional

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Old October 2nd, 2004, 07:56 PM
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i think cool and professional can be one and the same depending on what you're selling. for my design co we're working on this design http://www.angry-lizard.com/new/preview3.gif and for a design co, it looks professional and cool (at least I think)

But keep at it... you can only get better

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Old October 3rd, 2004, 12:05 AM
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well i made a lotta changes http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v417/majd-gfx/metalsitefinal.jpg what do u guys think?

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i see on the updated version there are now no links. i'm assuming you're still working on that, so may i suggest some bold black text for the links? may not even have to be bold, just something better than the previous brown you had. I liked the tan background for the content area better. it added a little variety in the coloring of the site. i'd put the tan background back in, and have black text for the background

other than that it looks like a really fun design. something i wouldve come up with in my early days

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Old October 3rd, 2004, 01:31 AM
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well the menu is gonna be in between the two caution tape things...it's gonna be black text...Arial Black to be exact. thnx bout the comment and yeah it was real fun to do

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Old October 3rd, 2004, 10:15 AM
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Hello,
I agree with everybody else. The graphics aren't too shabby, but the links on the bottom I can't see! They blend with your background image.
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