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Old October 23rd, 2004, 11:34 AM
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hi,
my website is www.musicparle.co.uk could you please have a look, and tell me what you think

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Old October 23rd, 2004, 01:57 PM
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Old October 23rd, 2004, 03:27 PM
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the link above works fine, but thankyou for saying that, because i have now realised that the home link at the bottom of the page doesnt, or maybe thats what you were telling me. well thanx anyway

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i meant the link above but its working now

i like your logo but i dont like it flashing. it gets annoying

also in mozilla your login script doesnt have both fields directly underneath eachother which looks a little weird and i also think you should make the blue a little lighter and perhaps change the font

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Old October 25th, 2004, 03:43 AM
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thankyou for your comments, anyone else got any thoughts?
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maybe try using a different font. Something solid like arial, tahoma, something like that

also, things seem to be getting lost in the whole black thing. Try sectioning stuff off.

I only just spotted the navigation, I would put that at the top


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Old October 25th, 2004, 06:51 AM
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thankyou, im taking all these points into consideration

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Music Parle That frameset seems a little pointless, you could have had the logo like that using css. Also the purple that links go makes them difficult to see once they've been clicked.

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i dont think this is the right place to post this, but this seems to be the closest to right place, so if the moderators could just read it through and then decide what to do with it and pm me please.

anyway, now that my site has been critiqued, i was wondereing if any of you had any ideas about how i could boost the visitors.
the forums are growing, slowly, but i would like it to be faster.
i am part of a banner exchange, and i am currently waiting to be added to google, but at the moment it seems to be going a bit slowly. according to my stat counter, i have had around 15 unque visitors (not including me), but only one returning visitor, over the past few days, so i need another way of getting the name about, and getting more people to visit. There are currently 7 members of the forums aswell, but i would expect people to return to a busy forum.

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go on other similar boards ask them if you can advertise your site if you advertise theirs
or just go on their site and post a link to yours

chat rooms - tell them your domain

offer incentives for people to get members

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1. Submit yourself to google, that'll speed up the process a tiny tiny tiny bit.
2. Get people to link to you
3. Be patient.

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Old October 26th, 2004, 11:13 AM
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thankyou for your comments, please keep them coming!
il get started as soon as the site comes back online

17:40 british time-now back online

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Yay! A neon animated GIF!

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also i think you have too many dance categories

to have rock and dance/rnb/techno on the same site is unusual

it will also cause arguments

im working on a site for club/house/rave music maybe we could do a link up when my site goes online (hopefully within the next week)

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