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Old August 8th, 2004, 05:23 AM
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can people give me some feedback about my site...

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Ummm well just a quick crit.. the journals... maybe you should make like a list with the topics and then with Ancors link the journals.. cause you got alot of journals on that page.. and makes it really really long.. this would help people find what they want

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thanks for letting me know. my friends seem to all say the same thing. i am working on changing this at present

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Old August 25th, 2004, 05:13 AM
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changing slightly. could i get opinions please; what to change, what you like / don't like?

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matt, could you kindly point out what you've changed?, i can't spot anything

okay, anyway, i don't know what you've changed, but i'll say some things anyhoo...

your front page still scares me with its length.

because of the clean, semantic and really rather pretty code, it wouldn't take much for you to join us in the land of xhtml 1.0 strict, and as someone who supports web-standards, as i read that you do, this should be something to aim for.

keep up the good work

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i didn't read your post properly, im sorry .

i would suggest you play with the colours to get a bit more contrast, but other than that and the ones above, i can't think of anything more.

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i changed a few little tweaks; widths and fonts mostly. as for the length, i am working on it at present, trying different methods. and as for the xhtml, aye, that too i am working on

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dude - instead of having your menu at the top/right of the page why don't you place the menu in a frame at the top of your page? usually frames are very annoying but I think it would work well on your site, and also there is alot of free space between the top of the page and the image/name of your site other than that I think its really high quality while not too fancy which is the best type o' site

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hmmmm, what would you guys suggest; archive monthly, weekly, or by topic?

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i think monthly

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yeah, i think i agree. to be honest, most of the entries i make are about more than one topic, so it would be hard to catagorise. monthly it will be i think. that'll be good.

does anybody have any other comments on the site? pleeeeeeease let me know, even if it's just a short sentance...

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Well, I think you should make it in pages... instead of trying to catograzie it or w/e.. as it does take waaay to long to load :P

The design looks cool, its very simple and straght to the point

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just so you know, i put it into monthly archives. i will probably change more as time goes on, but at the moment, it is automatically organised monthly. thanks people

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just so you know, i put it into monthly archives. i will probably change more as time goes on, but at the moment, it is automatically organised monthly. thanks people

Thats much better! Takes a lot less time to load! Nice job

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thank you sooooo much

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