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Old July 27th, 2004, 06:40 PM
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www.perfectvisionhosting.com

http://www.perfectvisionhosting.com

I finished the layout about a week ago. Please let me know what you think.

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Old July 27th, 2004, 06:49 PM
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The design in simple and straightforward.

I have a couple of suggestions.
1. Don't use an iframe. Though this is simply my opinion, frames are more problems than they are worth. The hurt the site in search ability and are not visible by all browsers. They are not very accessible. Again, this is just my opinion.

2. The main text/content needs some padding so it is not pressed up against the border. This makes it hard to read and just looks unfinished.

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Old July 27th, 2004, 06:52 PM
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i like it,
clean friendly simple easy to use, im not a big fan of your banner/logo though
but apart from that pretty good

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Old July 27th, 2004, 08:14 PM
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Banner

Would you like to give me a suggestion on what I should do about the banner, and be more specific about why you don't care for it? Thanks

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Old July 28th, 2004, 03:49 AM
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it looks a little bit tacky, with the black taking up half of it then just plain writing on it, i just think perhaps you should merge the pictures slightly at the edges and maybe make where its black with the writing a little bit shorter than the length of the logo like youve done with the images at the side ...i don tknow if this will look good or not but your logo doesnt look like it took long to make

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First of all the frames need to go like JFetting said :P and second the banner needs some low opacity or motion blurr done to it because the images you added looks like you just cut a piece of it and pasted it. Add a little fade between the pictures at least!

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Old July 28th, 2004, 01:41 PM
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as xero said thats what i was trying to say, ive just read what i put now, and i wasnt trying to be offensive, i know it might look a bit like that
it was just constuctive critisism i hope you didnt take it the wrong way
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i agree with the others here, the iframe should get the boot, i would suggest using php includes, i find them really useful... you should get the same effect as an iframe, but they're cleaner, user friendly and much more flexible.

if you really have a swanky set of servers like that, and attractive young ladies answering your phones, i would suggest employing a somewhat less attractive member of staff (possibly with a belly and some stubble) to be a full time web-master/designer...

as it stands, i wouldn't buy a gummi bear off you

how about that for sounding offensive but not wanting to , i'm not trying to suggest you hire me, i'm just trying to get the point across and amuse myself while doing it - sorry it's just the way i say things.

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i agree with the others here, the iframe should get the boot, i would suggest using php includes, i find them really useful... you should get the same effect as an iframe, but they're cleaner, user friendly and much more flexible.

if you really have a swanky set of servers like that, and attractive young ladies answering your phones, i would suggest employing a somewhat less attractive member of staff (possibly with a belly and some stubble) to be a full time web-master/designer...

as it stands, i wouldn't buy a gummi bear off you

how about that for sounding offensive but not wanting to , i'm not trying to suggest you hire me, i'm just trying to get the point across and amuse myself while doing it - sorry it's just the way i say things.


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I´m sorry, mate but with that way of saying things I´ll never let you see the website I´m screwing up in this moment

Anyway PV, I think is good to hear bad feedback. Good feedback is rarely useful.

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