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    Review my site www.davidtorrent.com


    Hello, how are you?

    I have just registered and this is my first message so, hello!

    I have done my personal website www.davidtorrent.com about the works and exercices done at university about web developing and others. I would be very glad if you do a little review about it.
    Just see the page and say what do you think about design, navigation, usability... The page has an english version.

    thanks.

    David
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    Hi

    Thank you Cibok for this review I'll try it. If you have a site I can do a review to

    David
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    David,
    Perfect. Just two things you may consider but are sheerly stylistic opinion, page is still perfect.

    1. What the blue mountain in the top? very abrupt...try to gradient fade it in.

    2. Business plan. Developing an e-commerce website. I would make these bullet points small headers <h4> Or if you keep it indent the text below so it all falls just to the right of it.
    Last edited by enzo250gto; December 11th, 2003 at 02:48 PM.
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    can't see your website. gave me connection timeout. don't know why. i'll try again later.
    Hope this helps.

    Mike
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    Hi

    thanks for visiting, or trying it
    Now it's running if you want you can enter.

    David
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    guess what? i'm connecting from home now, and i still can't view it. "Cannot find server or DNS error"
    Hope this helps.

    Mike
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    I don't know what's happening...

    Try this: http://cv.uoc.edu/~dtorrent/index.html The domain redirets to this page. Could be here the error but for me works. The page is so simple and you will se an english version.

    David
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    from my office (uses high speed line) to my house line (dial up) and to starbucks (wifi), finally get to see yr website.

    i agree with enzo250gto, mountain looks kinda chopped off. try gradient and feather. else it looks fine. plain and simple.
    Hope this helps.

    Mike
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    hi pda833 and enzo250gto!

    I see you don't like the mountains
    Thanks for your review, i'll take note and do some changes.

    thanks.

    David

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