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    Thumbs down some elp


    my site is looking ok i think?
    my site
    but i need ideas and ways of getting reviews and news.
    thanks for any advise
    pasty
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    I'm not too keen on the orange, and the large blocks of colour need a little breaking up really. Perhaps a slight gradient or something, just to liven them up a little bit. Perhaps a logo image too? Just to liven things up a little bit. It's OK, but needs a bit of work done on the cosmetics (images to make it more interesting really).

    Plus, may I persuade you to put a Doctype onto your page? It'll show the browser how you want to display it, and if you get it to be valid, you could show that fact off to people.
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    thanks for the tips
    im not shure how to go about a doc type but is it the same as css
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    Example of DOCTYPE:
    Code:
          <!DOCTYPE html PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD XHTML 1.0 Strict//EN"
            "http://www.w3.org/TR/xhtml1/DTD/xhtml1-strict.dtd">
          <html xmlns="http://www.w3.org/1999/xhtml" lang="en" xml:lang="en">
            <head>
              <title>Title</title>
            </head>
    
            <body>
              <!-- ... body of document ... -->
            </body>
          </html>
    There isn't much on your site, part from a forum that is pretty standard. Layout of the main page is OK, though the footer is pretty hard to read. Site doesn't really say what it's purpose is, except for one line description

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    thanks,
    what do u sugest i do about the description
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